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  • The Impossible Happens

    Ceiling of Mosque-Catheral of Cordoba, Spain

    “Now, George is ascending fast. He’s lifted on the choir’s chorus. The bass, baritones, and tenors build a foundation upon which columns of sound rise up. As the coloratura sopranos seize their climactic pinnacle, George is floating three hundred feet above the floor, kicking his legs in fright. He is bumping the crown of his head against the impossibly ornate ceiling.

    Vertigo. Dread. Exaltation. Confusion. He rotates his arms in circles for stability. The creamy vaulted dome restrains him. He panics. If the roof were not in place, he would float away across the plains of Andalucía.

    Then, it happens. The shell ceiling is peeled back and he is squeezed up through a gap and is ejected into an ocean of clear air far above Córdoba. Two fluttering angels swoop down on silken wings, grasp his arms, and lift him into the stratosphere.”

    Extract from “The Great Peace: journey to the heart”
    by Francis Walsh

  • El Tajo: a town cleft

    400 Year old bridge in Ronda, Spain

    Have you experienced El Tajo canyon?

    What do you remember? The town of #Ronda is certainly cleft. It is the setting for part of my novel “The Great Peace.”


  • One Word. Is it a noun or a verb?

    Some words pivot between naming and doing. “Focus” is one of them. It is the word that both Bill Gates and Warren Buffett used to describe how their success came about.

    If you use lots of nouns (names of things), your listener or reader will gather information and think about it. They start in info mode and slip over for a while to infer mode. They are comparing and contrasting. Measuring.

    Why? Because you set the context. You are naming things. It’s classic infer mode.

    If you use abstract nouns (names of ideas), they could turn off completely.

    They are okay with cat, hat and mat. But, once you start talking about experience, dependability, or knowledge, you’ll probably end up talking to fresh air (or someone who wishes they could get a breath of it).

    If you use verbs (words about doing), you set a context of activity. You encourage them to take action. To participate, they must do.

    Use verbs to describe. The view relaxes you. This coffee machine eases your day. Slide into the passenger seat and feel the luxury.

    Verbs encourage people to focus on action. So, the word for today (focus) really should be a verb.

    If your listener or reader needs to know more, stick with the nouns. Make sure everything is identified, measured and evaluated, to their satisfaction. The next step may lead instantly to a decision.

    So, focus on nouns and verbs. They set the context.



    Supporting Thought

    DeepWord can help you know how you are rating with nouns and verbs.

    Check out the “Wavelength” analysis. If it’s Analyzing and Appraising (infer mode), your nouns are dominating.

    If the “Wavelength” is Moving and Changing (inforce mode), the message is focused on action. Probably, the verbs are kicking along nicely.

    Let’s focus.


  • Ancient Bookstores: the sirens’ call

    Spanish street with bookstore

    “The bookstore had two differently shaped doors cut into an aging, black façade. Transfixed by the old-world charm of windows blocked in with antique books, he read the name: Librería Pérez Galdós.”

    “The Great Peace: Journey to the Heart”
    Francis Walsh

    Yes, there is something about bookstores. Irresistible.

    So, how about ancient bookstores? Magical and mysterious. Behind the counter you’ll almost always find someone who is so impossibly knowledgeable and inscrutable that you know you are in the right place to shift to another universe. And, that’s what you want. To fly away. To someplace else.

    That’s what Cole and Elin saw in my novel “The Great Peace:” something alluring and astonishing.

    The trouble was, by focusing on this object of desire they created an opening for a malicious character to attack them. It was Cole and Elin’s weakest moment.

    But that was just the start. It devasted Cole. But, Elin was exalted by its challenge. She would never surrender to malice. Never.

    The nasty character then faced the fight of his life. And, so did Elin.

    “The Great Peace: journey to the heart.”

    I’ll tell you the moment my novel is released.

    Do you love bookstores?

  • The Alhambra: Halfway to Heaven

    Doorway in the Alhambra overlooking Granada

    “After passing through the gardens of the blissful Generalife summer palace, the travelers floated into the Alhambra itself.
        Inside the building, the walls were covered with carved diamonds of alabaster, cascading, not from the ceiling, but from paradise itself. In the white marble courtyards, shimmering ponds mirrored filigree fountains that flashed and splashed in the sunlight. These were perfect little worlds of harmonious, mathematical proportion.
        This was the palace of the Moorish caliphate, when north African Muslims ruled al-Andalus. It sat high on the dominating hill, halfway between Granada’s warm earth and heaven’s cool, roiling clouds.
        When they were saturated with its magnificence, Elin and Dean strolled alone into delightful gardens. Water gushed in from the snows of the Sierra Nevada along ancient channels. It fed sprinklers that, in the warming day, left leaves wet and flowers glistening, waving in the slow, riding air. The soil was aromatic and sensuous.
        Elin breathed. “It’s incredible the Alhambra is still here. It could have easily drifted away.”
        “Magical. And, here we are, part of its … life. We are drawn to places that describe us.”

    Extract from “The Great Peace: journey to the heart”

    As if the confronting magic of the Alhambra was not enough, Elin and Dean experience another mystical strike that will change their lives, although they didn’t know it at the time.

    Please visit this extraordinary place at least once in your life. It hovers over the beautiful Spanish city of Granada. Above it are the snow-capped mountains of the Sierra Nevada. Below it, the land, particularly to the south, is dry and barren. But, here is an oasis of world class beauty, elegance and poise: a cool, shaded sanctuary for the soul.

    If you have been to the Alhambra, tell me about it. It must be the place on earth that is closest to heaven.


  • The Novel Completed

    Confident Woman Battling Gods

    Now, the First Infra Language Novel

    “The Great Peace” is Finished*

    *At least, for now.

    Phew! The exceedingly heavy work is over (for the time being).

    I have finished writing a novel called “The Great Peace: journey to the heart.”

    “Spain” is, of course, the main location of the story. But, it is more than that. Spain is a magical land where the present and the past burst into each other’s realm. Get ready for some challenges when you perforate time!

    “Heart” refers to the greater issue of human communication, which will eventually reach a point of divine stasis where we understand each other so well that there are no borders between us.

    “Journey” is about the foundations of Infra Language, which, if you read the novel, you will understand more deeply.

    So, the novel, “The Great Peace,” is a fiction and an entertainment. More than that, it is a subtle self-improvement manual for those who learn through the miracle of storytelling.

    Not only do many of the characters present themselves as Infra Language types, I used those principles to develop the narrative. I hope you enjoy it as much as I love the characters (well, most of the them).

    You can see that I have created a dummy cover to keep my mind focused on the main themes.

    Please read the excerpt below.


    The Great Peace: journey to the heart

    Madrid compressed then gradually released in a slow, inexorable rhythm that pumped life across the body of the land. In clear spring air, swallows scribed arcs over the city’s terracotta tiled rooves. On the rising boulevard artery of the Calle Gran Via, two middle-aged men patiently supported their frail mother along the broad sidewalk, chatting to her affectionatelyas she hobbled, leaning against their crooked arms.

    Years before, those three had strolled along the same grand thoroughfare. The men were little boys, each holding the hand of their beautiful, confident mother who looked so elegant in a fur-collared coat. Those three souls set a capital point that marked the living, passionate, and loyal heart of Spain.

    It was alive on this day.

    Down a narrow street leading to the north, a 16-seater Mercedes Vega tourist bus edged into a tiny parking indentation; its brakes and woman driver were already hot from the start-stop, turn-twist of Madrid’s Centro district.

    Across the bus’s metallic bronze flanks was printed, in scrolled magenta text, Journey to the Heart of Spain (Viaje al corazón de españa).

    The Vega’s long tail butted, inelegantly, into the single lane Calle Hortaleza, but the working vans and passenger Citroens and Fiats casually banked around it or flipped by flamboyantly.

    Of the thirteen people on board the bus, eleven hovered in various states of excitement. It was late in the afternoon on Day Two of their Spanish tour, and they had already settled into a comfortable social routine. It would not last long.

    Yesterday, was their first day’s adventure in Madrid.

    They were strangers; they spoke with reserve, holding close their lives, loves, and secrets.

    At the start, a confident young man stood to attention at the front of the bus. He was holding a microphone. Their tour manager was above average height, slim, and strong. He was neat, clean, and rigorously ironed. He was quite a picture in his cream shirt and dark blue trousers. “Good Morning everyone. Buenos días.” There was a mumbled response
    from the travelers. “Very good! Muy bueno. I am your tour manager, and my name is Carlos Martínez Baeza. Our driver is Lorena Molina Flores.”

    An olive-skinned woman in her mid-fifties swiveled around in the driver’s seat. She smiled and nodded politely to her passengers. She had black, wavy hair streaked with respectable gray strands that suggested she knew about life.

    Today, she had pulled it back tight and clasped it with a sprung comb. In this way, Lorena signaled that she was a qualified professional.

    The sounds of Centro, throbbing, rumbling, and occasionally screeching, became an enveloping blanket that settled over the bus.

    The neat, young man continued. “Some of you will have noticed we have a third member of staff on our bus.” He waited a moment for effect. He pointed to the religious statuette held upright on the dashboard with a metal clamp at its base. The travelers strained this way and that to see. “Over the next days, we will have San Cristóbal, or, in English, Saint
    Christopher, with us. Many of you know San Cristóbal is the patron saint of travelers. So, you can be sure, with our team of Lorena, San Cristóbal and myself, you will be in safe hands.”

    An amused murmur bubbled through the travelers. Tammy-Belle Jackson beamed and patted the knee of her thin husband, Isaac, who, unlike her, slotted neatly into the window seat. He was used to living with distinctive local customs.

    Tammy-Belle had happily introduced herself and her husband to the other travelers but, today, he did not appear to be particularly happy.

    She was a bulging woman in a floral dress from a suburb called Miami Springs. In her late fifties, Tammy-Belle often wore a floral perfume that was bright and cheap. Her sober-looking husband was fast approaching sixty-five years. He had a gentle and open face that looked every inch professorial. His demeanor suggested that this was the last place on earth he wanted to be. Isaac was black and Tammy-Belle was white. They had been married for nearly forty years. They had survived the early troubles with both of their families and were still devoted to each other. In some ways, the world had caught up with them.

    Behind them sat a man in his mid-twenties with a pinched, cynical expression. One side of George’s head was shaved, exposing a diamond ear stud. He wore a green, leather jacket that was styled to imitate snakeskin. He paid five-thousand dollars for it in a boutique store in Manhattan. At the mention of Saint Christopher, he rolled his eyes. If it was going to be that type of tour, he might hop a flight back to New York to find some sanity. If possible. He failed to see the irony that underpinned his raging impulsive thoughts.

    A Chinese woman from Long Island listened carefully and critically to Carlos. She recorded, analysed and evaluated the information he provided. Nan’s face was tilted toward the roof of the bus and she peered at Carlos down her small nose, using her chin as a gun site.

    Behind her, sat a porcelain beauty of infinite calm. Her name was Mia and she had wafted in from Palo Alto. Usually, nothing on earth could disturb her equilibrium. She was oceanically calm.

    There were other travelers on the bus, and some were more extraordinary.

    Carlos had announcements to make. He cleared his throat and lifted the bus’s microphone to his lips. He smiled, although he was not really the smiley type. “Please remember. When you purchase a meal is not provided by this tour, make sure you keep the receipt. This tour provides one hundred percent of your breakfast, lunch and dinner costs. One hundred percent.”

    The travelers’ whispered to each other; the noise rose to an amiable chatter. Carlos was expecting that. It happened every time with a premium tour. “However, your journey has a limit on those three meals.” The travelers now began to grumble and groan softly. Carlos played it well. “Each of you may spend a maximum of one-hundred euros per day on food and drinks and will be fully, err, reimbursed.”

    The travelers’ rumbling smoothed to a satisfied hum. They knew a good deal when they heard it.

    Carlos exhaled, which the microphone amplified. “We also have free Wi-Fi for you throughout our journey. The hotels will provide, but you are welcome to use our service.” He read out an internet link and a password. “With Wi-Fi use, is no limit. No limit. Is good, no?”

    After a brief pause for his announcement to sink in, Carlos continued. “Please know that today and tomorrow we have tours of the great city of Madrid. So, that is Day One and Two. The following days, Three and Four, are free. We have guides and advisors who will help you explore and learn. You can enjoy by yourself or with a guide. On Day Five, we drive
    south to Toledo.”

    For some reason, Elin Helstrom from Raleigh, North Carolina, tuned out. She was in a seat midway along the length of thebus, gazing at the people on the sidewalk. She was thrilled to be in Madrid. It was … fascinating. Elin sometimes got distracted when she was observing so acutely. And, it was unfortunate she didn’t hear Carlos’s last message.

    “If you need to contact me during our journey, please write my phone number. Is …” He announced his number twice, and most of the travelers added it to their cellphone Contacts list. But, not Elin.

    In retrospect, Day One truly set the scene. However, it was Day Two when the travelers received a powerful insight into the type of journey they were to experience.

    The sky was pale on the evening of the second day. A tour guide joined the travelers. He was a small, moustachioed man called Sebastián, who had a permanently bemused twinkle in his eye. He was expert in the Centro district of Madrid.

    As Lorena had parked the Vega bus on the left side of Calle Hortaleza, Carlos warned the travelers to exit with care. He was always wary about safety. It was crucial that he shepherd his travelers. If anything went wrong, it could cost him his job. And, he was grateful to have this work, despite everything.

    The travelers filed out of the bus and strode briskly across the single lane road to the slender sidewalk opposite. A delivery van paused patiently. Carlos waved his thanks.

    As the travelers began to spread along the sidewalk, Carlos held out his arms to corral them closer. They formed a tighter clutch, bumping against each other, giggling and apologizing. Then, Sebastián presented his introductory speech about the places of interest on Calle Hortaleza and in the alleyways nearby. The travelers strained to hear him above the swelling, city noise. From somewhere, the delicious smell of paella wafted along the street.

    One of the travelers, Cole, was a well-groomed young man of just twenty-one years. He knew that he had a handsome, chiseled face. Standing next to a knee-high balustrade marking the border between the road and the sidewalk, he was staring at a bookstore. It had two differently shaped doors cut into an aging, black façade. Transfixed by the old-world charm of windows blocked in with antique books, he read the name: Librería Pérez Galdós. Cole had seen nothing like it back in Chicago. At least, not on the south side.

    Once Sebastián’s introductory lecture was done, Carlos turned north toward the gentle fall of the pencil-thin street: he invited the travelers to follow him. Then, he called them, but his voice was drowned by a rising, rolling, roaring cacophony. Carlos beckoned the travelers to follow him. Some saw his gesture. Some did not. Some moved. Some were preoccupied. The noise grew louder. Then, it became deafening: banging painfully against the street’s tight walls.

    Like Cole, Elin Helstrom ignored the racket. She stared at the unusual bookstore. Maybe, she had seen it in her dreams. Maybe, she had hoped for it. Here was a perfect, romantic image of Spain, even though it was only one hundred years old. In this nation, that was yesterday.

    Amid the battering, blasting noise of a motor, there was a curious popping sound. A hiss filled the air, as though it were escaping from … something. The scene is transformed. Now, it is the bookstore’s first day. The lights inside shine dimly through the windows. There is a sign on the door: “Open.”

    A snubnosed 1942 Autarquia truck is parked to one side. It is brand new, pale green, and tilting slightly with one of its large wheels sitting on the cobblestone curb.

    Nearby, in pitiful resignation, a ragged, unshaven man stands on the grimy sidewalk. He is gloomily selling newspapers to pay for his evening meal. He has a rasping cough. He pulls his black beret over his forehead; he hunches inside his dirty, coarse overcoat. He coldly contemplates a woman in a tight-fitting woollen suit wearing a fashionable slanting fedora hat. She is impossibly elegant in somber gray with black highlights. It is perfect for Madrid. She holds a shallow wicker basket in which rests a loaf of fresh aromatic bread, part-wrapped in white tissue paper. It steams.

    Two soldiers in wide-thighed jodhpur pants and high leather boots stride past, purposeful and vain. Oncoming pedestrians make way, stepping left or right, as though unconsciously displaying their personal political persuasions.

    The bulbous hood of a deep blue, 1937 Chevrolet eases forward. It is belching balloons of acrid fumes.

    Elin’s hazy view holds her steady. Then, she feels an abrupt, hard shove in the middle of her back: a kick or a punch. Her legs buckle; she slumps forward into Cole. He takes the full force of her fall. In slow motion, he staggers onto the roadway.

    The vision from the 1920s fades fast and reality resumes.

    The street is now overwhelmed by an explosive sphere of noise. It is bursting from a Harley Davidson Forty-Eight with a single chrome headlight and a low-slung saddle.

    Accelerating, its fat tires smoked and gripped then threw the heavy machine directly into Cole. The handlebars punched into the left side of his ribcage. He crumpled around the strike: stiff metal against soft tissue and bone. The rider’s helmet skidded across Cole’s scalp. His neck twisted unnaturally. His torso spun and his shoulder smacked hard against
    the bike’s rear mudflap. Then, he rolled and lay with his face pressed hard against an unforgiving metal grate in the gutter. He stared into the dark stinking drain.

    It was all over in five seconds.

  • We’ll Make It

    lake and forest

    “We’ll Make It.” You may have seen that sub-heading above the links at the bottom of the home page. It has two meanings.

    First, it’s a positive acclamation that this ideal can and will be achieved. Second, it’s an exhortation to become a part of this creation of deeper understanding of all humans.

    Clearly, The Great Peace will not happen in our lifetime. But, each of us can reach a state of insight that gives us, and those we love, an exquisite taste of its profundity.

    The Great Peace of the future is an outcome of all the learning and application we have experienced about each other. It is the name of a time when everyone will know and react to each other so perfectly that the walls between us will dissolve.

    Infra Language is just a small step along this momentous path. It focuses on learning the deep language we all use but rarely understand.

    I would be so pleased to know that you have gained some benefit from learning about how we can reach out to each other in a harmony that resonates to the heavens.

    Let’s start along the beautiful path to The Great Peace now.